| Average Vote |
Total Votes |
Haiku |
Date Posted |
| 7.84 |
44 |
autumn winds whisper
and suddenly every tree
feels free to litter |
09/15/2008 |
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Rozlynne Commented on 10/16/2008: |
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I love the line, "...feels free to
litter." It gives the tree a
personification tone to it, that I
simply adore. Great writing, kepp it up. |
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bliss Commented on 11/10/2008: |
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Wonderful. I agree with Rozlynne and
love the way you expressed yourself
here. I am so new at this, how do you
vote? Please explain when you find
time. Thank you. |
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Russ Commented on 03/02/2009: |
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Nice, I like the iliteration of W and near ryme of second
and third line. And making a timeless image very
contempory. Thanks |
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