Luz de la Paz

Joined:12/18/2008

Age:29

Location:i travel

Profile: I like to write haikus.

(I'm a photographer.)

Email:everundone@gmail.com

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Luz de la Paz's Haiku:
Average Vote Total Votes Haiku Date Posted
8.42 12 it takes no talent
to snare the small, wounded bird
it wants to be caught
    Bronze Trophy Winner for December 2008                    Comments(5)
12/18/2008
5.85 13 darkness in the day
standing in the blood soaked soil
it rains heavily
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12/18/2008
4.89 9 eager to be perfect
the world trembles before him
averting his gaze
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12/18/2008
4.83 6 your kind eyes and their
unforgiving long glances
assessing me so
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12/18/2008
6.88 8 i believed the words
cards dealt from a pack of lies
a crumbling castle
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12/18/2008
5.23 13 things moving forward
he leaned over and said hey
and bought my next drink
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12/18/2008
4.71 7 bobbing in the waves
there's no sand beneath my feet
just rocks and seaweed
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12/18/2008
5.60 5 there is nothing
ordinary or supernatural
about him
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12/18/2008
5.00 5 he paints angels, yes
and horses with mouths open
hooves stamping wildly
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12/18/2008
4.27 11 defending ideas
occupying his own mind
he's deaf to my cries
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12/18/2008
5.00 6 album de fotos
un reloj en la table
una sonrisa
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12/18/2008
6.00 9 puedo ver el tren
la mano y la rama
una flor blanca
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12/18/2008
6.73 11 it rains softly now
highway splits the black forest
a grey road toward home
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12/18/2008
5.75 12 this is wasted grief
look at me; who i've become
living in a grave
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12/18/2008
6.50 8 whisk me away in
a bright striped balloon above
the maddening crowd
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12/18/2008
5.57 7 it's my final fete:
i lived my whole life just to
hear three words from you
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12/18/2008
6.67 12 looking at the bridge
turbulent waters beneath
pendulums for limbs
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12/30/2008
6.55 11 morning begins it
a crescendo of actions
your pillow still warm
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12/30/2008
6.17 12 the dog's bowl empty
he licks the edges of it
hoping for a crumb
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12/30/2008
6.17 6 the moment right then
beginning of happiness
possibility
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12/30/2008
5.69 13 it's a timeless place
i miss the race of rabbits
and burrowing in
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12/30/2008
5.50 10 sweeping sea of sand
a caravan passes through
footprints lost in time
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12/31/2008
6.56 9 A group of people
standing in a yellow room.
No one is smiling.
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12/31/2008
6.30 10 I'm not incomplete
just wholly unsatisfied
with everything now

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12/31/2008
7.00 15 in my life's pursuits
i had never dreamt of this.
i wake up seach time.
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12/31/2008
7.40 15 laying bricks at night
I am resigned to this fate
sad and perspiring
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12/31/2008
6.80 10 with a face like that
you'd think he'd be funnier
or at least nicer
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12/31/2008
5.92 13 blown to smithereens
a million little pieces
this was once my heart
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12/31/2008
4.92 12 that you loved me still...
grant me a life of comfort
in not knowing you
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12/31/2008
8.18 11 you are buried deep
I cannot recover you
even if i tried
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12/31/2008
5.18 11 staring at my feet
still the sky hangs overhead
staring at the ground
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12/31/2008
6.29 17 This is absolute.
That's how I remember you,
as breaking my heart.
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12/31/2008
6.50 8 It's not you, it's me.
You'd disappear in my world.
Nothing personal.
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01/01/2009
6.88 17 civilization
buried in a history
could not continue
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01/02/2009
6.14 7 waves crash the shoreline
the beach wants to be alone
grey, uninviting
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01/02/2009
6.73 15 shadows from sun in
folded corners of the house
echoing your voice
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01/02/2009
5.83 6 colmena ronda
colonia de abejas
nuestra casa
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01/02/2009
5.20 10 grandes arboles
en mi mano, las plumas,
marron tierra
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01/02/2009
6.59 17 threadbare at the seams
hesitating passersby
flying at half-mast
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01/04/2009
6.18 11 not-so-secretly
your eyes were lidded loosely
watching me get dressed
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01/06/2009
5.95 19 trying to stay afloat
my arms tied behind my back
sadly, i'm drowning
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01/06/2009
5.53 15 I was that young deer
you were a bow and arrows
raining down on me
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01/09/2009
6.07 15 the nature of you
the outcome is uncertain
or so I reckon
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01/09/2009
6.00 12 you spoke without words
all the things we didn't say
came out anyway
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01/09/2009
5.75 8 solo un hombre
un poco empanado
hecho de oro
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01/11/2009
5.89 9 strange fruit that bore me
my flesh fine, core spoiled rotten
with my stem intact
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01/12/2009
7.25 8 aprender a volar
mi pajaro de papel
paloma blanca
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01/13/2009
5.67 12 filling up spaces
things last longer than people
outliving us all
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01/18/2009
5.50 16 the brooding oak tree
sorrowfully aware, has
set roots long ago
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01/18/2009
5.19 16 I'm just a shipwreck.
All I know is this chaos,
flotsam and jetsam.
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01/18/2009
6.53 15 the groaning floorboards
betraying your silent steps
make your presence known
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01/18/2009
4.62 13 dew drops on the car
browning prairie flowers picked
for me yesterday
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01/18/2009
6.20 15 the map of your face
with all the familiar roads
leading me toward home
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01/18/2009
4.15 13 When the lights go out,
I want to watch you sleeping
and not be creepy.
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01/18/2009
7.00 18 down a deep, dark hole
overwhelmed by depression
there is no way out
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01/18/2009
6.17 12 so many loose ends
3 figures under the tree
stare into the hole
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01/18/2009
5.53 17 Powder, my favorite.
It's winter, white and quiet here.
Snow snowing on snow.
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01/18/2009
5.87 15 bricks or sticks or stones
the house was built around you
foundation and all
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01/21/2009
6.25 20 static in my head
dark have been my dreams of late
by fear of sorrow

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01/21/2009
6.13 8 it is here we dwell
ease the pain of his passing
while we linger on
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01/21/2009
6.29 14 see the earth breathing
the land is sill dividing
without flags or lines
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01/21/2009
6.13 16 by the owl's yellow eyes
the white shadow of the moon
filtered through the leaves
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01/21/2009
5.00 7 pray we're that lucky
standing on the precipice
rich beyond measure
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01/21/2009
3.75 8 abre el libro
la ultima pagina
solo su nombre
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01/21/2009
6.75 8 como hermanos
quiero mi hermano
vivo o muerto
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01/21/2009
6.62 13 como quieres
la nueva frontera
para siempre
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01/21/2009
6.87 15 vida eterna
una causa perdida
promesa rota
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01/21/2009
5.11 9 seer, square shooter
anything is possible
made up of whole cloth
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01/25/2009
5.75 12 your gaze upon me
i feel your eyes bore through me
right where is once was
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01/25/2009
5.92 13 busy phantom hands
scrub the perfectly clean sink
only pain remains
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01/25/2009
6.53 17 my thoughts are running
while the pen is writing this
running through a maze
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01/25/2009
4.79 14 with your steady gait
show us the meaning of haste
show us brevity
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01/25/2009
6.09 11 hope in white petals
ever has it grown on tombs
like the green mosses
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01/25/2009
4.45 11 the spirit is willing
the great eye ever watchful
the flesh is failing
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01/25/2009
5.75 16 as you search the sky,
wish on shooting stars for me
and light a candle
  Silver Trophy Winner for January 2009                      Comments(0)
01/25/2009
6.85 13 silently he crept
into one of those spaces
usually reserved
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01/25/2009
5.81 16 looking straight ahead
at white and purple mountains
it's not her he sees
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01/25/2009
3.95 19 watcher in the trees
orange, yellow fish in the pool
jungle woods at night
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01/25/2009
5.56 16 present and past in
the history of a face
future yet unknown
Gold Trophy Winner for January 2009                        Comments(1)
01/25/2009
6.68 22 ivy covered wood
an irish wolfhound sniffing
his search is in vain
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01/25/2009
6.29 21 the faintest vestige
dust particles blown away
forgotten window
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01/26/2009
5.50 14 he stands before me
yet he has never seen me
close, i feel him breathe
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01/28/2009
5.64 14 dos palabras
la propina es gratis
olvidar todo
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01/30/2009
4.59 22 unattainable
you always float above me
ever out of reach

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02/03/2009
3.71 14 you'll fly in my sky
seeing places never seen
not even dreamt of
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02/05/2009
5.08 13 I know where you've been.
Tried, can't cut out my compass,
lose myself again.
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02/05/2009
4.81 27 That's it, I've had it.
This can't happen anymore.
Enough is enough.
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02/07/2009
5.72 18 too many moments
in the same old place, same things
i've been here too long
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02/07/2009
4.50 14 well apparently
it's your outlook that matters.
we're all mired in shit.
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02/11/2009
7.36 11 I'm shy and I'm proud
and some things move me to tears
like everyone else
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02/22/2009
6.29 14 the world in your hands
i cannot help who i love
the line leads to you
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02/22/2009
5.00 8 you, happy with a secret
the world being what it is
you will learn sometime
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02/22/2009
6.07 14 to be lost in it
ocean with no memory
a beach with soft sand
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02/22/2009
4.69 13 there is something more
it has to begin somewhere
it's never-ending
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02/22/2009
1.71 7 the nature of life
the big wheel keeps on turning
you resume your role
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02/22/2009