bliss

Joined:11/04/2008

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Location:Coeur d'Alene, ID

Profile: Feeling shy about sharing my humble attempts at Haiku here, as many of you are extremely talented poets. I enjoy reading your work, and have been inspired. Thank you.

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bliss's Haiku:
Average Vote Total Votes Haiku Date Posted
7.73 15 my spirit wakens
joyful, sensing your spirit
restless no longer
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11/04/2008
6.28 18 soft the butterfly
hot your manhood against me
sweet the morning dew
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11/05/2008
6.33 12 young ones dance and leap
in leopard leotards, my
spirit dances now
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11/07/2008
6.62 13 life's reflection blinds
my heart's eyes, vile searing pain
clouding compassion

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11/10/2008
6.70 20 beautiful clear light
passion birthing love, or lust
robbing the light's joy
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11/10/2008
6.83 18 anticipation
most muscles tighten slowly,
but toes quickly curl
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11/13/2008
5.21 19 trembling I wait
eager for your urgency,
following is bliss
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11/13/2008
7.24 17 you thought you knew me
hiding disappointment, shocked
I thought I knew you
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11/19/2008
5.00 15 strong trusting wanting
loving, then truth is revealed
the butterfly weeps
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11/19/2008
7.67 9 angry tiger growls
dominance is proven then,
must it be cruel
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11/19/2008
5.00 14 yes you are licensed
the only thing you're driving
is yourself, crazy
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11/23/2008
5.87 15 the deepest kisses
while lingering in my mind,
are impotent now
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11/23/2008
6.33 12 still not good enough
do it again was shouted,
indifference lasts
    Bronze Trophy Winner for November 2008                    Comments(0)
11/23/2008
7.00 12 hands, gentle large strong
touching healing tender sweet,
now I want his hands
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11/23/2008
6.88 8 sated, we laughed talked
and opened, the sweetest joy
was warmth from your fire
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11/23/2008
5.42 12 my pleasure she said
as the creaking door, ajar,
echoed silent tears
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11/24/2008
5.38 13 barnyard critters are
playing, fearing not the feast,
oh you silly goose
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11/24/2008
6.18 22 each riding bareback
mountains revealed their splendor,
lakes reflected love
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11/24/2008
8.25 12 eyes, old unseeing,
grizzled weather-beaten face,
release me he begs
  Silver Trophy Winner for November 2008                      Comments(2)
11/24/2008
6.75 8 disease kills children
dwelling in filthy hovels,
they shall not know peace
Gold Trophy Winner for November 2008                        Comments(0)
11/24/2008
6.89 18 silently it glides,
death comes invisibly to
creatures unaware
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11/24/2008
4.56 9 still when it begins
dripping like a garden hose,
grief overtakes me
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12/06/2008
4.75 8 now the holidays
here again with a vengeance,
reminders of us
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12/06/2008
4.67 9 smiling I respond
to questions asked without guile,
my heart is bleeding


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12/06/2008
5.44 9 longing for your touch
listening to memories,
darling, I miss you
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12/06/2008
5.27 11 I no longer ask
the why questions of life's path,
acceptance brings peace

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12/06/2008
4.22 9 armed with plastic bags
do not walk your dogs at night,
flashlights sometimes fail
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12/10/2008