thehiphaiku

Joined:08/07/2012

Age:20

Location:Ontario, Canada

Profile: Just want some feedback on my haiku's.
Thank you very much.

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thehiphaiku's Haiku:
Average Vote Total Votes Haiku Date Posted
5.67 15 This haiku is soft,
Like her skin is to the touch.
How I miss her touch
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08/07/2012
4.62 13 Rules of engagement;
Please, use just your hands and feet.
Guns are cowardly.
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08/07/2012
5.47 17 One star at a time
She rhymes, she wishes at night
One dream at a time
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08/07/2012
6.44 18 Canadian Geese,
Those fucks walk across the street,
Shitting everywhere
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08/07/2012
5.08 13 Oh what a damn fool,
He crushed that flower's sweet heart,
It must've been spring...
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08/07/2012
4.10 10 I lay there quiet
Listening to birds chirping
Beautiful spring day
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08/07/2012