thehiphaiku
Joined: | 08/07/2012 |
Age: | 20 |
Location: | Ontario, Canada |
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Just want some feedback on my haiku's. Thank you very much. |
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thehiphaiku's Haiku:
Average Vote | Total Votes | Haiku | Date Posted |
5.67 | 15 | This haiku is soft, Like her skin is to the touch. How I miss her touch Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |
4.62 | 13 | Rules of engagement; Please, use just your hands and feet. Guns are cowardly. Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |
5.47 | 17 | One star at a time She rhymes, she wishes at night One dream at a time Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |
6.44 | 18 | Canadian Geese, Those fucks walk across the street, Shitting everywhere Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |
5.08 | 13 | Oh what a damn fool, He crushed that flower's sweet heart, It must've been spring... Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |
4.10 | 10 | I lay there quiet Listening to birds chirping Beautiful spring day Comments(0) |
08/07/2012 |