Jakob Petrie

Joined:02/17/2009

Age:18

Location:Missoula

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Jakob Petrie's Haiku:
Average Vote Total Votes Haiku Date Posted
5.90 10 Trash Bin-

Collector of trash
creates no waste of its own
solitary bin
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02/17/2009
5.18 11 Trash Can-

A small sized dumpster
sharing a similar task
weeps when we litter
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02/17/2009
2.57 7 Clock-

Mounted on the wall
the clock doesn't feel time pass
ticks robotically
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02/17/2009
7.00 6 This girl named Susan-

Susan is scary
children run from the ogre
teddy bear with claws
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02/17/2009
6.86 14 To Haiku Raters-

Your power is great
determines my happiness
7 or above please


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02/17/2009
5.14 7 Scissors-

Blades join together
cutting paper to make crafts
running is not safe
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02/17/2009
3.80 10
Refrigerator Magnets-

posing in silence
our decorative friends
negatively charged
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02/24/2009
5.22 9 Wine Bottles

liqour caused moments
lost fermented memories
glass will become sand
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02/24/2009
4.12 17 Mad-libs

jumble of adverbs
comes together at the end
appreciate syntax




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02/24/2009
5.00 8 doorknob note

hung and public note
future point of contention
don t care who is right
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02/24/2009
4.45 38 Moving in-

unloading boxes
carefully starting over
it is a new year



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08/26/2009
3.82 39 Flag-

symbol of our land
betsy ross made it perfect
except for the stars
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08/26/2009
4.50 34 Carpet-

stepped on and abused
never asked about its day
nailed to the ground


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08/26/2009
4.16 31 Best haiku-

Five syllable line
second line has seven more
last line makes you think
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08/26/2009
3.91 32 knowledge

many things i know
just take up space in my mind
and weigh my head down

Gold Trophy Winner for October 2009                        Comments(0)
10/20/2009
3.08 36 thoughts of tomorrow
when today is yesterday
and that was today
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10/20/2009
2.83 30 rating

those who rate me low
are not mean or malicious
i dont deserve tens
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10/20/2009
3.50 30 thoughts

my thoughts do not flow
they erupt and cloud the sky
then the sun is gone
  Silver Trophy Winner for October 2009                      Comments(0)
10/20/2009
3.76 33 reader of this poem
i hope life is going well
and that youre happy
Gold Trophy Winner for November 2009                        Comments(0)
11/10/2009
3.33 39 rate this poem a ten
i will send you lots of cash
and get through the day
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11/10/2009